ALL - Feedback received

Mag Ad:

• The Mag Ad feedback received was that it was overall very good. However elements such as the font used seemed unusual and not as varied as it could be.
• Replace the URL's with just icons- they're generally familiar with everyone.
• Good enigma / lack of exposition- it looks obscure and in keeping with the Nine Inch Nails 'tone'.
• The beware CCTV looks good and fits.
• Framing of the candle seems to be good- fits with theme of the genre
• Some of the blending between images (the solid lines between them)

Sample Footage(two):

• The special effects worked
• pace was good
• good variation of shots
• Some shots are on screen too long & are too jarring/ don't mesh well with the editing style.
• Maybe even more enigma!
• More could be done with the fire extinguisher (loop to beat?)
• Shots of just the protagonists eyes would still maintain the enigma, or extreme close-ups.
• Frames slipping would add to the damaged video effect.